Advanced Writing Final Draft Rmit
By: buiduchuy • July 30, 2019 • Essay • 609 Words (3 Pages) • 1,676 Views
Writing Feedback Cover Sheet 2: FINAL DRAFT
Name: | Bui Duc Huy | Student number: | L9938154 | ||
Class: | S61903G | Teachers: | Raymond Gustafson | Date: | 1/5/2019 |
Word Count: | 479 | ||||
Click on the box to cross it | ☒ | Changes I made after feedback: | |||
I have used Arial. | ☒ | Response - ideas | ☒ | ||
I have used font size 12 | ☒ | Organisation | ☒ | ||
I have double spaced | ☒ | Grammar | ☒ | ||
Vocabulary | ☒ | ||||
Student self – assessment: Select Good OK or need to improve for each area | |||||
Response & Revision | Grammar | ||||
A full description | Good | Range of structures | Need to Improve | ||
Used teacher feedback to improve | Good | Correct sentence structure, subject verb agreement and punctuation | OK | ||
Structure & Planning | Vocabulary | ||||
Logically ordered, cohesive (linking words, pronouns) | OK | New vocabulary | OK | ||
Made and followed a plan. | OK | Spelling & Word Forms | OK |
I confirm this is my own work………………Bui Duc Huy………………………………
Bui Duc Huy L9938154 S61903G |
Cantho Library: How to Become a Hybrid Library
Library is an ideal destination for Vietnamese pupils to enhance knowledge. Rewarding materials provide a vast amount of beneficial things to learners. Cantho public library is the most prominent library in the Mekong Delta. However, it also has many issues which create a negative impact on the quality of library because of the lack of investment. This report will analyze three weaknesses needing to be boosted in Cantho library.
Firstly, Cantho library has remained unchanged outdated documents and problematic books over the past ten years, but it has many appropriate solutions to solve this problem easily. While many worldwide libraries are able to promote the quality of a large number of books annually, both technology and materials are completely out of date which do not satisfy Vietnamese student needs at the present time. Therefore, expanding digital learning is an essential solution to promote standards of learning in the era of technological advancement. After that, local students will have opportunities to borrow digital books or access foreign databases to enhance their knowledge more efficiently. This initiative is extremely necessary and plays an integral role to improve the Vietnamese library standards.
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